The Galactic Fleet of the Alliance has just launched their newest Tactical Carrier...the U.S.S. Atlantis. This ship is the most massive starship the Galactic Fleet has ever launched. Her highly trained crew hales from many different worlds, and represent many different species. In command of the Atlantis is Captain Mitchell Bowen, a former fighter pilot and veteran of the Incirrata War. While the Atlantis is preparing to leave the dry dock, Bowen receives word that an old enemy from back in the Incirrata War has word that his long dead fiance might still be alive. With his thoughts filled with his dearly departed fiance, Bowen takes a ship and goes to meet with this old enemy. Meanwhile, a flotilla of dark and mysterious alien warships appears at the edge of the Atlantis' home Star System...and Atlantis is the ONLY ship that can stand in their way.
The Galactic Fleet of the Alliance has just launched their newest Tactical Carrier...the U.S.S. Atlantis. This ship is the most massive starship the Galactic Fleet has ever launched. Her highly trained crew hales from many different worlds, and represent many different species. In command of the Atlantis is Captain Mitchell Bowen, a former fighter pilot and veteran of the Incirrata War. While the Atlantis is preparing to leave the dry dock, Bowen receives word that an old enemy from back in the Incirrata War has word that his long dead fiance might still be alive. With his thoughts filled with his dearly departed fiance, Bowen takes a ship and goes to meet with this old enemy. Meanwhile, a flotilla of dark and mysterious alien warships appears at the edge of the Atlantis' home Star System...and Atlantis is the ONLY ship that can stand in their way.
While Captain Bowen deals with the political aftermath of High Elder Plonak’s nearly disastrous with holding of fifty starships in the face of a Hellkin attack, Red Kite 40 is sent to an asteroid field to investigate a mysterious wreck found wedged in a vast canyon on a planetoid. The Atlantis’ Hellkin Expert, Dr. Parker accompanies the ship, hoping to find interesting Hellkin artifacts. However, when their investigation turns up something unexpected, Galactic Fleet Central Intelligence Division shows up and orders them to vacate the area. What’s worse, C.I.D. then orders the Atlantis and her Battle Group to enforce a security zone while they strip the mysterious wreck of all its secrets. What is aboard the mysterious wreck that the Central Intelligence Division doesn’t want known, and what does it have to do with the Hellkin?
I've always LIKE these designs, that being said How do the Other ships that are similar fit into this new Concept story of your?
I 've alway been a Fan of if I'm correct the New York version of this model, with the flat nose!
Either way hey looking good 3/4 mile long and no "STAR WARS" envy to to make someone crazy good job!
Looking Forward do seeing that, May I offer 1 small variation to your plans, make the New York Version either smaller or Larger and make it a Flag Ship, it really one of the very best version of your ship!:thumb::thumb::thumb:
$10 for a 116 page e-book, who suggested that price?
amazon did
I highly doubt that KDP would suggest that price. You are a first time author, and the book is barely novella length, and that's before you even dive into the meat of the book. Which, reads like a story bible for a series, with an early draft of a pilot, more then an actual book.
I'm not trying to sound harsh, but the book is seriously rough and needs work.
Book Title: Hell Sent
Authors: Michael Brown & Myles Edmundson
Genre: Space Opera
Description: The Galatic Fleet of the Alliance has just launched their newest Tactical Carrier...the U.S.S. Atlantis. Her highly trained crew hails from many different worlds. In command is Captain Mitchell Bowen, a former pilot and veteran of the Incirrata War. A flotilla of alien warships appears at the edge of Atlantis' home Star System and only the starship can stand in their way.
Book Title: The Wreck
Authors: Michael Brown & Myles Edmundson
Genre: Space Opera
Description: Red Kite Forty is sent to an asteroid field to investigate a mysterious wreck found wedged in a vast canyon on a planetoid. When their investigation turns up something unexpected, Galactic Fleet Central Intelligence Division shows up and orders them to vacate the area.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0788D87SJ
Book Title: Despot's Paradise
Authors: Michael Brown & Myles Edmundson
Genre: Space Opera
Description GLITTER IS SHOT DOWN!
While following a lead on the Hellkin battle group that attacked Simmal, the Atlantis reaches the edge of the Naziortol star system. The Naziortol system is ruled by a species of extreme xenophobes who will attack anyone who trespasses into their territory. When Bowen discovers that the Atlantis? new stealth fighters have been sabotaged, he is forced to order Glitter to fly a jury rigged stealth fighter. However, when Glitter?s makeshift stealth system fails while she is deep inside Naziortol territory, she is shot down. Now Bowen?s ground crew has to race to fix the sabotaged stealth fighters. Meanwhile, Glitter is captured by the Naziortol. Will Glitter manage to escape the Naziortol? Will the Atlantis manage to mount a rescue? https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07DTJ54QC
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Look who's back nitpicking B4000's renderings!!! Somethings never change!
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I read the book. Have some constructive crits for you, send me a PM.
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While Captain Bowen deals with the political aftermath of High Elder Plonak’s nearly disastrous with holding of fifty starships in the face of a Hellkin attack, Red Kite 40 is sent to an asteroid field to investigate a mysterious wreck found wedged in a vast canyon on a planetoid. The Atlantis’ Hellkin Expert, Dr. Parker accompanies the ship, hoping to find interesting Hellkin artifacts. However, when their investigation turns up something unexpected, Galactic Fleet Central Intelligence Division shows up and orders them to vacate the area. What’s worse, C.I.D. then orders the Atlantis and her Battle Group to enforce a security zone while they strip the mysterious wreck of all its secrets. What is aboard the mysterious wreck that the Central Intelligence Division doesn’t want known, and what does it have to do with the Hellkin?
I 've alway been a Fan of if I'm correct the New York version of this model, with the flat nose!
Either way hey looking good 3/4 mile long and no "STAR WARS" envy to to make someone crazy good job!
I highly doubt that KDP would suggest that price. You are a first time author, and the book is barely novella length, and that's before you even dive into the meat of the book. Which, reads like a story bible for a series, with an early draft of a pilot, more then an actual book.
I'm not trying to sound harsh, but the book is seriously rough and needs work.
Book Title: Hell Sent
Authors: Michael Brown & Myles Edmundson
Genre: Space Opera
Description: The Galatic Fleet of the Alliance has just launched their newest Tactical Carrier...the U.S.S. Atlantis. Her highly trained crew hails from many different worlds. In command is Captain Mitchell Bowen, a former pilot and veteran of the Incirrata War. A flotilla of alien warships appears at the edge of Atlantis' home Star System and only the starship can stand in their way.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B075X3VRR4
Book Title: The Wreck
Authors: Michael Brown & Myles Edmundson
Genre: Space Opera
Description: Red Kite Forty is sent to an asteroid field to investigate a mysterious wreck found wedged in a vast canyon on a planetoid. When their investigation turns up something unexpected, Galactic Fleet Central Intelligence Division shows up and orders them to vacate the area.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0788D87SJ
Book Title: Despot's Paradise
Authors: Michael Brown & Myles Edmundson
Genre: Space Opera
Description GLITTER IS SHOT DOWN!
While following a lead on the Hellkin battle group that attacked Simmal, the Atlantis reaches the edge of the Naziortol star system. The Naziortol system is ruled by a species of extreme xenophobes who will attack anyone who trespasses into their territory. When Bowen discovers that the Atlantis? new stealth fighters have been sabotaged, he is forced to order Glitter to fly a jury rigged stealth fighter. However, when Glitter?s makeshift stealth system fails while she is deep inside Naziortol territory, she is shot down. Now Bowen?s ground crew has to race to fix the sabotaged stealth fighters. Meanwhile, Glitter is captured by the Naziortol. Will Glitter manage to escape the Naziortol? Will the Atlantis manage to mount a rescue?
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07DTJ54QC
https://www.amazon.com/dp/1093877154